"The Gentle Pen" - How to Write a Great Kid's Book!

Blog Title: What Makes a Great Children’s Story? Here’s My Secret

As a children’s author, people often ask me, “What makes a great kids’ story?” And for me, the answer is simple—a great story speaks to the heart while whispering a meaningful message into the reader’s ear.

When I sit down to write, my goal isn’t just to entertain. I want to leave something behind—a thought, a lesson, a spark of understanding. I tuck these messages gently into the folds of each story, like a little surprise for young minds to uncover as they laugh, gasp, and turn the pages.

Why I Always Hide a Message in My Books

In "Tommy and the Broken Window," Tommy is a curious, impulsive boy (inspired by my own son when he was small!) who lets his imagination lead him into trouble. But behind the humor and chaos lies something important: a reminder that we must take responsibility for our actions and that sometimes, the bravest thing we can do is admit we were wrong - and learn to just pause and think before we act.

Then there's "Nutty and the Whimsy," one of my most whimsical tales, about a cheerful squirrel who stumbles upon a magical underground world. Beyond the fairy dust and enchantment is a message about true friendship—how it can bloom in the most unexpected places when we open our hearts to others.

And "Charlie Munches the Moon"? Well, that one always makes kids laugh—but it’s also a gentle nudge about balance in life. It’s easy to get carried away by our cravings and wants, but we need to remember to give back, share, and do good in our community. Even a boy who eats the moon can learn that.

What I Believe Makes a Great Children’s Story

I’ve been telling stories most of my life, and here’s what I’ve learned about what truly resonates with children:

1. Relatable Characters Whether it’s a mischievous child or a curious squirrel, I make sure my characters feel real. I want children to see themselves in the story—to feel like they could be friends with the hero, or that they’ve made the same mistakes.

2. Meaningful Messages (That Don’t Preach)

Children are wise little beings. They don’t need a lecture. They need a story that lets them discover things for themselves. That’s why I weave life lessons into the narrative—quietly, respectfully, and with heart.

3. A Touch of Magic

I believe in wonder. I always add a little sprinkle of the fantastical—whether it’s a moon being munched or a forest hiding tiny whimsical beings. Magic gives children the space to dream big and think beyond the ordinary.

4. Lots of Laughter

I love to make children laugh. Laughter is often the doorway to learning. If a child giggles their way through one of my books, they’re more likely to remember what the story was really about.

5. Emotional Truths

A great story stirs something inside. Maybe it’s pride, or sadness, or joy. But it always touches a real emotion. I want my books to comfort, challenge, and inspire young readers—even long after the final page.

Why I Do What I Do

Writing for children is one of the great joys of my life. There’s something incredibly fulfilling about seeing a child’s eyes light up with understanding or laughter—knowing that something I created made them feel seen, safe, or inspired.

My hope is that my stories will become little treasures children carry with them, helping them navigate the world with empathy, courage, and imagination. That’s what makes a great children’s story, in my eyes—and it’s why I keep writing, day after day.

Because in every giggle, every gasp, and every quiet moment of realization—I know I’ve reached a young heart.

And for me, that’s everything.

Write Gently.

—Liv McLean